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Steelers vs. Raiders haiku contest

November 22, 2010 By: Admin Category: Haiku contests

The Steelers won an action packed, physical, penalty-filled game against the Oakland Raiders on Sunday.  Now it’s time for fans to capture the key elements of the game in a haiku.

The contest rules are simple. You must summarize the Steelers-Raiders game in a haiku. A haiku is a form of Japanese poetry that contains only 3 lines. The first line has 5 syllables, the second line has 7 syllables, and the third line has 5 syllables. Typically, haiku do not rhyme.

Please note, the emphasis is on syllables, not words. Remember 5/7/5.

I start the competition by offering a haiku of my own. Then you readers write a haiku of your own to try to beat mine. On Thursday I will announce this week’s contest winner. But remember, your haiku has to be better than mine.  If none of your entries are better than mine, then I take home the prize.

Here is my entry:

Neither flags by refs
Nor blows by Richard Seymour
Could stop our Steelers

The winner of this week’s contest is going to win a copy of the book “Find A Way” by former Steelers player and current NFL analyst Merril Hoge.  It’s a great book that belongs on the bookshelf of any Steelers fan.

This week's prize

Okay readers, your turn.  Lets see who can come up with the best haiku about the Steelers-Raiders game.

Are you ready for some haiku?!!

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6 Comments to “Steelers vs. Raiders haiku contest”


  1. No worries for Shaun Suisham
    Ben took a punch in the face
    Steelers win big over Oakland

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  2. Yes, the Steelers won /
    Seymour to Roethlisberger /
    was best smash-mouth play.

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  3. John,
    Good try, but the syllables aren’t right. This isn’t a haiku.

    A haiku has to have 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second line, and 5 in the third line.

    Please try again. Thanks.

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  4. Kavinay,
    We all know that you’re not a Steelers fan (I think you’re a Ravens fan, right?). Nevertheless, that was a good haiku.

    Obviously, we Steelers fans will not agree with the sentiment of it. But it does meet the rules of being a proper haiku.

    Good job (sort of). ;-)

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  5. Chuck Noll named it
    The criminal element
    This time it’s the refs!

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  6. No worry for Suisham
    Ben took a punch in his grill
    Steelers win big time

    I don’t know what I was thinking. Thanks

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