Steelers vs. Raiders haiku contest
The Steelers won an action packed, physical, penalty-filled game against the Oakland Raiders on Sunday. Now it’s time for fans to capture the key elements of the game in a haiku.
The contest rules are simple. You must summarize the Steelers-Raiders game in a haiku. A haiku is a form of Japanese poetry that contains only 3 lines. The first line has 5 syllables, the second line has 7 syllables, and the third line has 5 syllables. Typically, haiku do not rhyme.
Please note, the emphasis is on syllables, not words. Remember 5/7/5.
I start the competition by offering a haiku of my own. Then you readers write a haiku of your own to try to beat mine. On Thursday I will announce this week’s contest winner. But remember, your haiku has to be better than mine. If none of your entries are better than mine, then I take home the prize.
Here is my entry:
Neither flags by refs
Nor blows by Richard Seymour
Could stop our Steelers
The winner of this week’s contest is going to win a copy of the book “Find A Way” by former Steelers player and current NFL analyst Merril Hoge. It’s a great book that belongs on the bookshelf of any Steelers fan.
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This week's prize
Okay readers, your turn. Lets see who can come up with the best haiku about the Steelers-Raiders game.
Are you ready for some haiku?!!
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No worries for Shaun Suisham
1Ben took a punch in the face
Steelers win big over Oakland
Yes, the Steelers won /
2Seymour to Roethlisberger /
was best smash-mouth play.
John,
Good try, but the syllables aren’t right. This isn’t a haiku.
A haiku has to have 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second line, and 5 in the third line.
Please try again. Thanks.
3Kavinay,
We all know that you’re not a Steelers fan (I think you’re a Ravens fan, right?). Nevertheless, that was a good haiku.
Obviously, we Steelers fans will not agree with the sentiment of it. But it does meet the rules of being a proper haiku.
Good job (sort of).
4Chuck Noll named it
5The criminal element
This time it’s the refs!
No worry for Suisham
Ben took a punch in his grill
Steelers win big time
I don’t know what I was thinking. Thanks
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